In the drama Romeo and Juliet both main characters die tragic deaths at the end of the of the play. If I could change the ending of the drama I would change that Romeo would not have not gotten charged with exile. Tybalt was to blame for his blood thirsty acts that lead him to his death and the death of Marcutio. If Romeo was not exiled then Juliet would have not taken that potion. After that Romeo would have told both there parents that if there was no further agreement between the two families them they would both kill them selves. The families would have come to an agreement and Romeo and Juliet would have lived happily ever after.
slade99 
You ending is a little confusing but it is good! Maybe you can explain how Romeo got exiled and why he shouldnt?! Just an idea.
I like your story it’s good but I think there should be some more explanation in how everything turns out.
Although (as pointed out above) a little concise, I agree with your idea to blame hotheaded Tybalt for the whole thing – his actions did lead to Romeo’s banishment, and things started going downhill from precisely that point. He is a prime example of why the Capulets and Montagues hate each other.
But why necessarily “kill themselves” if the families didn’t make peace? Hoping that [the families] suddenly just start to like each other only works in Hollywood. Romeo and Juliet should try to make peace, obviously, but if it doesn’t work out they should just go and live a separate, happy life. I mean, doesn’t this play have enough tragedy stuffed into it already?